After I was held up on my journey to work this morning I looked at your online content to see if there was any information as to why the A23 was at a near standstill this morning. Your article First the snow, then the ice, now the cows was very informative and provided the information I was seeking.
I just think the headline lacks something though. It has no sparkle, no pizazz; it doesn't draw the reader into the article. I've taken the liberty of writing a few headlines for you that you may, on this occasion, use totally free of charge to replace the existing effort.
"Cows cause com-moo-ter chaos"
"Cows create car-nage"
"Cows create car-nage"
Should you wish me to write further headlines on your behalf I'm sure that you will find my freelance charges very reasonable.
Yours in good faith
manwiddicombe
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